Do Note That All Maplestory Light Source Comes From The Top Left Corner. So You Have To Darken the Right Side Of The Hair And Give It A Little Space To Add Some Light Shading At The Sides As When The Character Is Facing AWAY From The Light Source (You Flip It) There Cannot Be Exactly NO Light Source Shone On The Character At All. So The Bright Shading Would Be Along The Sides. Good Tutorial But Not Perfect.
Also, I Do Not Quite Like How You Shaded The Right Part Of The Hair. Too Much Light Shading And As The Hair Curves, It Doesn't Give Off A Curling Effect IMO.
Also, The Outlines Could Do A Little Bit Of Work. The Right Filler Look Strange As There Is A Sudden Curve Near the End Of It.
Also, Try Not To Make The 2 Digit Numbers Too Big As I Cannot See The Left Part Of The Hair.
And I Spot A Little White Dot There When You Erased The character's Face.
Wow! Great job on this tutorial! This will help many budding custom hair makers to shade and create better hairs! I enjoyed reading through it, but I did notice some spelling errors in this tutorial, but I understood it anyways. I love the layout of this tutorial. It looks very organised and fabulous! Once again, great job on this tutorial!
It's a 100 word minimum, so I'll add onto the critique. I love the way you shade the hair! This tutorial has also helped me for pixelating in the future! You are a great teacher!
Also, I Do Not Quite Like How You Shaded The Right Part Of The Hair. Too Much Light Shading And As The Hair Curves, It Doesn't Give Off A Curling Effect IMO.
Also, The Outlines Could Do A Little Bit Of Work. The Right Filler Look Strange As There Is A Sudden Curve Near the End Of It.
Also, Try Not To Make The 2 Digit Numbers Too Big As I Cannot See The Left Part Of The Hair.
And I Spot A Little White Dot There When You Erased The character's Face.
That Would Be All For Me.
It's a 100 word minimum, so I'll add onto the critique. I love the way you shade the hair! This tutorial has also helped me for pixelating in the future! You are a great teacher!
Argh 100 word minimum again.
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